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Thoughts on my deliverable format:

“First tell ’em what you’re going to tell ’em, then tell ’em, then tell ’em what you told ’em” – Teddy Roosevelt, I think.

In general, not impressive.

Doesn’t connect strategy with architecture.

Doesn’t stand on it’s own, explaining what you’re seeing. Comes from lack of narrative and and lack of keys and maps.

If something is uncertain, that’s OK, just explain it.

I blame a personal shortcoming on no visual design experience, but this stuff isn’t hard, it just requires careful thought.